A Flood

The heavy rain has been pouring down for several days. Not only fields but also villages have been flooded. Last night, houses were washed away by the flood, and the villagers were in danger, struggling in the water, crying for help. Just then, the PLA men hurried over by steamboat. They did their best to save the villagers and helped them to move onto the riverbank. The government was very concerned about the villagers. Tents, food, clothes, and medicine were sent to them without delay. Without the Party and the PLA men, a large number of people would have lost their lives in the flood or died of hunger.

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